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Tuesday, December 13, 2016
Monday, December 12, 2016
Cookie Currency (Week 8)
What if all currency was replaced with cookies. More valuable cookies have more value and worth while cheap cookies are low forms of cash. Freshness and condition of the cookies also plays a role in the value (fresh, condition=value)
If all currency was replaced with cookies, there would be some mistakes. Generally, the wealthier countries now will have the ingredients to make all of the cookies. Some countries might make too much and some might not make enough. If there are too many cookies, there’s no turning back. The economy would be ruined due to the lack of value in the cookies. The value would be so low because there would so many cookies that it is common to have lots of them.
If there are not enough cookies and the country is still wealthy, all is not lost. All the country has to do is make more cookies. The effect that the small amount of cookies has on the country is bad and good. It would be bad because it would be so hard to make money (cookies). It would be good because the value of each cookie would be very high. If I was in charge, and if the cookie currency were a thing, then I would make sure there would be the perfect amount of cookies in order to keep the economy stable.
My Writing Center Experience (week 8)
I had a great experience at the writing center on Tuesday. My writing fellow, Chima Mbagwu, helped out with my paper a lot. I was confused on lots of things such as: quotes, the introduction, the conclusion, and my thesis. I also put extra spaces in between paragraphs that weren't supposed to be there, which affected the length of my paper. So, we had to add some quotes and details to my introduction and my supporting paragraphs.
We noticed that most of my quotations were incorrect and we fixed them. The type of detail we added were quotes and referring back to my thesis in the supporting paragraphs. We ended up adding enough detail to make the paper go slightly over three pages. I found that the writing center was the most beneficial source other than Dr. D. If we ever write another paper this year, I plan on going there to help me successfully write my paper.
Saturday, December 3, 2016
Literary Analysis Process
I have found that writing this Literary Analysis is not an easy task for me. One of the things that has been difficult for me is developing the introduction. I know what I want to say I just don't know the best was to say it. It took me a long time to start it on paper. To get help with how to start I had to look at examples of other introductions on Canvas. That was very helpful but I still had to work hard to get it done.
The part of the process that was easier for me was the body of the paper. Working hard on the outline made developing each paragraph easier. The outline was the guideline for developing the main parts of each supporting point. I could come up with lots of different arguable points to support my thesis but what was difficult for me was picking which ones were best and when to write about them. Once the introduction was done and the outline was complete the rest of the process was easier.
The part of the process that was easier for me was the body of the paper. Working hard on the outline made developing each paragraph easier. The outline was the guideline for developing the main parts of each supporting point. I could come up with lots of different arguable points to support my thesis but what was difficult for me was picking which ones were best and when to write about them. Once the introduction was done and the outline was complete the rest of the process was easier.
Free Post Too Many Birthdays
In my family there are too many birthdays too close together. With the exception of my mother everyone in my house, including the pets, has a birthday within about a two week period. The birthday time in my house begins with my sister Chloe, her birthday is October 29th. My birthday is next, I was born November 7th. My baby sister, Sophie, was born November 8th. Last my dad's birthday is November 13th.
So here is how that works at my house. Chloe expects a celebration thought the whole week of her birthday. She usually gets the special birthday treatment she demands. That celebration ends about the time my birthday arrives, sometimes not even then. But by November 8th my birthday is over. Baby sister Sophie's celebration begins and it lasts until my dad's birthday. There are too many birthdays too close together in my family. And trust me you don't want to be in the middle like me.
So here is how that works at my house. Chloe expects a celebration thought the whole week of her birthday. She usually gets the special birthday treatment she demands. That celebration ends about the time my birthday arrives, sometimes not even then. But by November 8th my birthday is over. Baby sister Sophie's celebration begins and it lasts until my dad's birthday. There are too many birthdays too close together in my family. And trust me you don't want to be in the middle like me.
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